The pie charts show the changes in the proportions for different forms transport which people used to get to their offices and turn back in a European city in 1959 and 2009

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The pie charts compare five types of vehicles which were used by people to do their daily work in a European country in 1959 and 2009.

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although

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the average distance increased in 2009, the duration decreased

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it, because of the modern technologies and it is obvious that other types of transportation were used by few people to reach work.

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, the dominant vehicle was the foot in 1959,

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it was the car in 2010. To look at details,the main transport was the foot in 1959 with 55%,

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it dropped to 25% in 2009.

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, using the train and the bus to travel followed similar patterns and almost remained stable for two years at 15%.

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, despite the fact that only 5% of the citizens went to workplaces with other vehicles in 1959, the number of people who used other transportation went up by 12% in 2009.

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, individuals were less likely to use cars as vehicles in 1959, with the contribution of new

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, it rose by 25%.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

174 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

modes of transport
private transport
public transport
car ownership
cycling
pedestrian
commuter trends
urban infrastructure
traffic congestion
environmental sustainability
public policy
evolution
percentage
proportion
decade
convenience
accessibility
reliability
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The pie charts show the changes in the proportions for different forms transport which people used to get to their offices and turn back in a European city in 1959 and 2009

Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by private companies rather than governments. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? Write an essay with at least 250 words

some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

some people suggested that cars should be banned in the centrals of the large cities. Do you agree or disagree？

In many countries people have to pay for medical care, but some think that it should be a free service provided by the government. To what extend Do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearances. Discuss both views and give your opinion.