The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph depicts the total of three types of question methods directed to the Tourist Information Office in a certain city in the first half of 2011.
Overall
, the option of asking directly climbed every month Linking Words
while
via letter fell gradually. Linking Words
Besides
that, visitors Linking Words
inquired
by phone dropped just one month and remained increased in other months.
Looking in more detail, in January, the Tourist Information Office received enquiries offline by just over four hundred, compared to 750 calls and 850 emails. Correct pronoun usage
who inquired
However
, from February to April, the number of tourists came to the office for help surpassing both preferences for a total of 1200 data points.
Despite mail requests declined by 800 letters in February, it rebounded in March and April with 200 higher before climbing Linking Words
with
the final number of 1600 messages. Change preposition
to
On the other hand
, the public that used electronic Linking Words
writings
represented a descending trend, making up a significant decrease from March to May before Fix the agreement mistake
writing
steady
in June for a final value of less than 400 calls.Add a missing verb
being steady
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