The table below shows the results of a survey of first-year students taking various courses at a particular university. It shows how many of the students considered various aspects of their course "very good".

The table below shows the results of a survey of first-year students taking various courses at a particular university. It shows how many of the students considered various aspects of their course "very good".
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The table below illustrates the results of
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first-year
students enrolled in various courses at a
spasific
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specific
university. It indicates the number of students who rated different aspects of their course as "very good".
Overall
, it is visible that the teaching quality section has the highest proportion of
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satisfaction
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the smallest one. Opening, the educator competence and tutor support in financial have kind of similar
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(95% and 92%).
Also
, resources reproduction and
further
are about 59% and 62%. And pre-lecture information has 55% of pupils. At the same time, in presedent preparation instructor and resources (else) have totally the same number. Whilst, the percentages in the educator and image sections have a little difference between 72 and 70.
Although
, pedagogical
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skill
has 67% of respondents
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aspects as "very good".
Moreover
, in industry class pre-conference and instructional parts have completely
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digits (95%). With
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professor has 93%.
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Furthermore
, the
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of undergraduates taking special business sessions in photocopy and
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are 81% and 86%.
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