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The graph below gives information about international tourist arrival in different parts of the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about international tourist arrival in different parts of the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line charts illustrate the changes in the number of tourists that visited several parts of the world from 1990 to 2005
Overall
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, The data highlights significant growth in international tourism globally, with Central and Eastern Europe emerging as a notable competitor to North
America
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 in attracting tourists by 2005.
On the other hand
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, other regions like South-East Asia, Sub-Saharan Africa, and South
America
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 experienced more moderate increases in tourist arrivals.
To begin
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 with, North
America
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 started at just above 70
million
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 visitors in 1990 and experienced a steady rise to around 90
million
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 by 2000 and continued to remain stable until 2005. For Central and Eastern Europe, travellers in
this
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 region demonstrated a significant increase, increasing from approximately 30
million
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 in 1990 to nearly 90
million
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 by 2005. As for the region of South East Asia, an upward trend in tourist arrivals occurred, growing from around 20
million
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 in 1990 to over 40
million
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 in 2005.
Lastly
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, Sub-Saharan Africa and South
America
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 had similar patterns of slow and steady jump, rising at the same position from just under 10
million
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 in 1990 to slightly above 20
million
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 in 2005.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words america, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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