You are having a graduation party next Sunday evening. You have invited over 25 people to celebrate in your garden, which may continue late into the night. Write a letter to your elderly neighbor. In your letter: · Explain what will be happening · Offer your apologies in advance · Invite him to join the celebration Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Mr. Kulligowski

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Dear Mr. Kulligowski, I hope

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letter finds you well. I am writing to inform you that next Sunday evening, I will be hosting a graduation party in my garden to celebrate

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milestone. I have invited over 25 friends and family members, and we anticipate that the festivities may continue late into the night. I want to sincerely apologize in advance for any noise that may arise during the celebration. I understand that late-night gatherings can be disruptive, especially for someone who appreciates the

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, and I truly appreciate your understanding.

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, I would like to extend a warm invitation for you to join us in the celebration. It would be wonderful to have you there to share in the joyous occasion. If you're interested, we will have plenty of food and drinks, and it would mean a lot to me to celebrate together. Thank you for your understanding, and I hope to see you next Sunday! Warm regards, Trang Dao

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task achievement

To enhance your task response, consider adding more details about how you will manage noise or any preparations to minimize disruption.

coherence cohesion

Try including a brief closing sentence that reaffirms your apology and willingness to address any concerns Mr. Kulligowski might have.

suitable writing tone

Polite and thoughtful tone maintained throughout the letter, especially with the invitation and apology.

complete response

Each part of the prompt is addressed clearly and concisely.

greeting and closing

Excellent use of greetings and closings creates a warm and respectful tone.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

165 words

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