The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in different types of educational settings in the Philippines, in 2017.

The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in different types of 

educational settings in the Philippines, in 2017.
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The given bar chart illustrates the proportion of two genders who taught in five different teaching places namely: Elementary
school
, junior high
school
, Senior high
school
,
college
and university in the Philippines in 2017.
Overall
, from Perspective, It is readily apparent that most Men teachers prefer to teach at
College
and University,
whereas
women choose to educate at elementary
school
, junior high
school
and senior high
school
. Looking at the details in the chart, more male tutors taught at
college
than females.
For example
, 80% of men were educated at
college
, compared with around 55% of women. Another Point to note is that fewer male teachers were instructed at
elementary
Capitalize word
Elementary
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School
, junior high
school
and senior high
school
than female instructors.
For instance
, about 25% of men tutors taught at Senior high
school
,
while
roughly 90% of women tutors, at the same
school
. A final point to mention is that there was a slight difference in the percentage of teachers who taught at university.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words school, college with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender distribution
  • educational settings
  • primary education
  • secondary education
  • tertiary education
  • gender disparities
  • teaching profession
  • representation
  • societal factors
  • cultural influences
  • economic influences
  • policy influences
  • student perceptions
  • educational outcomes
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