You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table shows the number of mobile phones sold in millions for a period of six years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The table represents the phone
sales
in millions for a
Correct article usage
the
period
between 2006 and 2012.
Overall
, there is a noticeable increase in total
number of Change the article
a total
the total
sales
and also
several downward trends between
the Change preposition
during
period
.
For instance
, the most significant decrease in numbers was the Motorola brand. The number of sales
dropped over the whole period
. The main decline was from 2008 to 2009. The sales
fell sharply by almost 2 times. Quite the same downward trend has
Correct your spelling
as
Ericsson
brand, but there are some differences. The Correct article usage
the Ericsson
sales
of the brand reached a peak in 2007. After that
there was a stable decline in numbers.
There are noticeable upward patterns in Samsung and Apple Add a comma
that,
sales
. In the first year (2007) Apple sales
were only 2.3 million, but after 6 years, in 2012 the number was a sharp rise to 135.8 million. Samsung has quite the same trend. Between the period
of 7 years, from 2006 to 2012, the numbers of sales
grew steadily.Submitted by khotkina.ma on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, period with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "downward" was used 2 times.
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