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Nowadays anyone can post news on the internet. As a result, we cannot trust information we read there. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

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In the present day and age, certain sections of people anticipate that since everyone is able to publish anything on the
Internet
, nobody can be sure of the reliability of the content found online. I partially agree with the aforementioned notion for sundry reasons as shall be elaborated presently.
To begin
 with, surfing online has been indeed a well-founded platform for the best source of
information
. To exemplify
this
, online media provides the quickest and most economical means of accessing an immense amount of
information
. To cite an example, In
this
 contemporary era, various platforms
such
 as YouTube, Instagram and Facebook are extremely prominent among youngsters, where they can post their own thoughts and work free of cost.
As a result
, anyone perhaps could acquire specific expertise on any subject from the foundation of social platforms;
thus
,
this
 practice should not always be solely liable for inaccurate data.
On the other hand
, there are several reasons that lead the masses to opine a daunting task about the
Internet
, since doesn’t always furnish correct news. The first factor is that some websites spread false
information
 to mislead the crowd in the form of rumours.
For instance
, owing to
having
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being
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 easily approachable to
Internet
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the Internet
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, many websites release fake content regarding famous personalities and politicians.
Therefore
, they may suffer a lot.
Moreover
, big firms use Google ads to promote false products, which are not trustworthy to the customers. In the view of arguments outlined above one can conclude that, Despite the fact that the
Internet
 renders some irrelevant
information
 which is not trustable, their speed to deliver
as well as
 on a cheap rate is dire to ignore.
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task achievement
Work on improving clarity and comprehension by using more straightforward language. Some complex sentences make the essay difficult to follow at times. Simplifying your sentence structures can enhance readability.
task achievement
Provide more specific examples to support your points. Instead of general mentions of platforms like YouTube or Instagram, consider including specific instances or studies that illustrate the dissemination of trustworthy or untrustworthy information.
coherence cohesion
To improve logical structure, ensure that each paragraph sticks more closely to a single idea or argument. This will help in reinforcing coherence and making the essay easier to follow.
task achievement
The essay addresses the topic well and provides a balanced view on the ability to trust information on the internet, indicating a good understanding of the topic's complexity.
coherence cohesion
Clear introduction and conclusion that frame the essay well, outlining the main arguments for and against the reliability of online information.
coherence cohesion
The essay uses an appropriate structure with separate paragraphs for different points, aiding the reader in understanding the flow of ideas.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Credibility
  • Verification
  • Misinformation
  • Disinformation
  • Journalistic standards
  • Algorithm
  • Engagement
  • Source discernment
  • Anonymity
  • Traditional news outlets
  • AI and machine learning
  • Reliable sources
  • Unverified information
  • Amplification
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