The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade"-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade"-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The tables compare the
sales
figures for two
Fairtrade
products in the UK,
Switzerland
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and Switzerland
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. Denmark, Belgium, and Sweden in two separate years.
Overall
,
sales
of
Fairtrade
coffee increased in all five countries,
while
there was mixed success for
similarly
labelled bananas, and the leading country in each table had significantly higher
sales
than the rest.
Sales
of
Fairtrade
coffee were relatively modest in 1999, and Switzerland was the largest consumer with €3
million
in
sales
. Despite
this
figure doubling in 2004, the UK rose from third place (with €1.5
million
) to lead the table with €20
million
worth of
sales
in the same year. A figure that was considerably higher than in any other country.
Although
the three remaining countries
also
saw increases, these were marginal with gains of between 0.2 and 0.7
million
euros. With
Fairtrade
bananas, Switzerland was again the leader in 1999 and dominated
this
table in both years with
sales
increasing from €15
million
to a striking €47
million
.
Although
considerably lower, the UK and Belgium saw similar growths in
this
category, increasing by just over 5 times their 1999 figures to reach €5.5 and €4
million
respectively.
In contrast
, Sweden and Denmark experienced a drop in
sales
, with the 2004 figures (€1
million
and € 0,9
million
) almost half of those of 5 years earlier.
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