The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016.

The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016.
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The image depicts the amount of money spent in the USA for children’s charity and how much was received in a 12-month period.
Overall
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, it can be seen that donated food accounted for the majority of the income,
while
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program services accounted for the most expenditure. Total revenue sources just exceeded outgoings. In detail, donated food provided most of the revenue for the charity, at 86%.
Similarly
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, with regard to expenditures one category ,program services, accounted for nearly all of the outgoings, at 95,8%.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • donations
  • grants
  • fundraising events
  • expenditure
  • administration costs
  • program expenses
  • direct benefits
  • indirect benefits
  • underprivileged children
  • education
  • healthcare
  • shelter
  • nourishment
  • medical treatments
  • basic needs
  • financial sustainability
  • transparency
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