the graph gives information about male and female gym membership between 1980 and 2010.

the graph gives information about male and female gym membership between 1980 and 2010.
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The line chart provides statistics about the patterns of the number of male and female gym participation during the period from 1980 to 2010.
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, it is clear from the graph that the figure for men’s gym membership was greater than for women in most years and it reached a peak in 2005.
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, the number of men members experienced significant increases and declines throughout the mentioned interval,
whereas
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female membership rates had an increasing trend in general.
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what is shown, the number of males began with nearly 2000 members in 1980,
then
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it witnessed a rapid growth to double over 5 years. Afterwards, dropped to under its starting point by 1995. In the year 2005, it soared to
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5000 members and
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decreased significantly to get below a thousand by 2010. In terms of the count of female participants, it started at nearly 1000 and experienced a gradual growth to become slightly under 3000. Over the course of 15 years, from 1995 to 2010, it fluctuated between approximately 2000 and 3000.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fluctuate
  • Spike
  • Steady increase
  • Decline
  • Plateau
  • Peak
  • Surge
  • Membership uptake
  • Gender disparity
  • Health consciousness
  • Fitness regimes
  • Societal norms
  • Technological advancements
  • Demographic shift
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