The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007.

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007.
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The line chart provides statistics about the figure of international tourists visiting three different areas in a specific country throughout the interval of 1987 to 2007. The units are measured in thousands.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that the number of the coast’s
visitors
saw steady growth in most years.
In addition
, the counts of people who had visited the mountains witnessed a slight increase,
whereas
tourism in the lakes experienced a jump in the rate of
visitors
.
According to
what is shown, the number of overseas guests to the lakes began at 10,000 in 1987 and increased significantly to peak at 70 thousand
visitors
by 2002. Over the course of the
last
5 years, from 2002 to 2007, it dropped to 50,000 in 2007. In terms of the number of the coast’s
transient
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started at 40,000 and declined slightly during the period from 1987 to 1992. Afterwards, it saw a substantial rise to become the highest compared to the other areas at nearly 75,000 tourists. The count of the mountains’
visitors
began at 20,000 and experienced a slow increase between 1987 and 1997, and
then
remained approximately stable at around 30,000.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • overseas visitors
  • number of
  • areas
  • European country
  • between
  • 1987 and 2000
  • graph
  • introduce
  • overview
  • trends
  • describe
  • analyze
  • compare and contrast
  • summarize
  • main findings
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