The diagram below shows the process of canning of fish. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the process below.
The given picture illustrates the process of canning
of
Change preposition
apply
fish
. It is manifest from the flow chart that 15 steps are involved from the initial catching to the final dispatch to supermarkets.
Use synonyms
First,
the Linking Words
fish
are caught and Use synonyms
then
frozen and stored in the next step. Linking Words
Then
they are unloaded and weighed before Linking Words
thawed
. After thawing, they are cut into big pieces and Add a missing verb
being thawed
then
are Linking Words
steam cooked
. After cooking, these are cooled and Add a hyphen
steam-cooked
then
these are filleted or cut into small pieces. Linking Words
Then
these pieces are canned. Brine, water or oil is added Linking Words
in
the cans. In the next Change preposition
to
step
the cans are sealed and Add a comma
step,
then
heated for sterilization. Linking Words
Then
, stamping or labelling of the cans is done before storing them for final dispatch to Linking Words
super markets
for sale.
Correct your spelling
supermarkets
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
Linking Words
canning
of Correct article usage
the canning
fish
is a lengthy and tedious process involving many steps. Each step is very important to retain the freshness of the Use synonyms
fish
and to make it consumable for a long time.Use synonyms
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fish with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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