The two maps below show an island, befor and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The two maps below show an island, befor and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
The given maps illustrate alternations of an
island
before and after the construction of various tourist buildings with the aim of improving the level of accessibility and hospitality to visitors.
Overall
, in its original state, the
island
was primarily undeveloped, featuring few natural elements,
such
as a beach and some scattered palm trees, and no buildings, roads, or infrastructures.
In contrast
, the second map depicts that many tourist accommodations have been built, connected by newly structured footpaths.
In addition
, a reception and restaurant have
also
been built in the centre of the
island
, providing services.
Further
developments include the addition of a pier on the southern coast, which allows boats to anchor, and a designated swimming area on the western beach, which is available by an exclusive walk-side. Roads dedicated to vehicle ambulation link the pier, reception, and restaurant, making their accessibility more convenient. In conclusion, the significant changes include the development of fundamental buildings
such
as accommodation houses, transport routes, and entertainment facilities,
while
preserving the unique natural resources of the
island
.
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