The two maps below show an island, befor and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
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The maps provide key information about the
Island
before and after the tourist facilities in 100 metres, The Units are measured by metres.
Overall
, it is clear from the first map
it is empty while
the second map
was after working on it and the updates, In addition
, the visitors always need some updates on the island
like services and many restaurants.
According to
what is shown, on before Island
, there were many trees and beach, sea, in 100 metres. Moreover
, There
are no tourist facilities and the Fix capitalization
there
island
is not ready to receive visitors yet. In contrast
, There is no pier to receive people who are coming from the boat.
In terms of the second map
, There are some updates on the island
. There is a reception to say hello to the visitors receive orders and help them such
as security. Furthermore
, There
are many Hotels and restaurants, especially service to the people. The second Fix capitalization
there
map
can serve the tourist other than the empty map
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, map with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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