The table and pie charts below show the number of research students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table and pie charts below show the number of research students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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of
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that were enrolled in research programs in Australian universities in the years 2001 and 2010.
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, both the local and international
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' enrollment increased in 2010. Foreign
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' female proportion increased in 2010,
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, the percentage of Australian females
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were research
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decreased in 2010. There were 38,849
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in research programs in 2001,
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number increased to 54,081 by 2010. Compared to local
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, their foreign counterparts approximately tripled in number, from just above 5000 in 2001 to almost 15000 in 2010. In 2001, 87% of the total
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were local.
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number was reduced to just under three-quarters by 2010.
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, International student numbers inclined to more than double, at 27% by 2010. The most significant change was the female proportion of international
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, which rose to 15% in 2010, from just 4% of the total in 2001.
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