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The bar chart shows informationa bout salt intake in the US in 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows informationa bout salt intake in the US in 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the
amount
 of
salt
 being consumed by males and females in the United
State
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 in the year 2000.
Overall
, it can be seen that men have higher
salt
 consumption compared to
women
. Except
from
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for
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 children under 6 and
women
 over 60 years old, people consumed much more
salt
 than the recommended
amount
 in the US.
To begin
 with, children under the age of 6 consumed the least
amount
 of
salt
, much lower than the recommended intake, by roughly 2000
miligrams
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milligrams
 and 1250
miligrams
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milligrams
, boys and girls respectively. These numbers are almost
as
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half of the consumption of
which
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adults aged 20 to 39, with men having the highest intake of 4500
miligrams
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milligrams
 and
women
 approximately 3125
miligrams
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milligrams
, far exceeding the recommended
adults
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adult
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salt
 intake of 2500
miligrams
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milligrams
 in the US For the remaining figures, boys
aging
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 6 to 11 consumed the same
amount
 as men over 60 years old. Males from 12-19 and 40-60 consumed the same
amount
 of
salt
 by 4125
miligrams
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milligrams
.
For females
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Females
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, from the
age
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ages
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 of 6-11, 12-19, and 40-60 had the same consumption of roughly 3000
miligrams
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milligrams
. At the same time,
women
 over the age of 60 consumed the exact
amount
 of 2500
miligrams
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milligrams
 of
salt
 recommended for adults in the US.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, salt, women, miligrams with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
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