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The line graph gives information about the number of Iranian, Greek and Turkish students who enrolled at Sheffield University between 2005 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The line graph gives information about the number of Iranian, Greek and Turkish students who enrolled at Sheffield University between 2005 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The line graph depicts the number of international
students
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 from Greece,
Turkey
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, and
Iran
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 who were accepted at Sheffield University from 2005 to 2009.
Overall
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,
Turkey
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 and
Iran
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 saw a significant upward trend in enrolments,
while
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 Greek admissions plummeted annually.
To begin
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 with, Sheffield University accepted 180 Greek
students
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 in 2005, the highest number among the three countries,
However
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,
this
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 figure dropped significantly to 70
students
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 by 2007, making it lower than
Turkey
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 and
leveling
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 off with
Iran
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.
Also
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further
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 declining to only 45
students
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 being accepted in 2009, being 4 times lower than its peak in 2005.
In contrast
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, enrolments from
Iran
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 and
Turkey
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 showed an upward trend. The number of Iranian
students
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 grew sharply from 40 in 2005 to over 80 in 2007, surpassing Greek admissions, and
further
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 increasing to 160 by 2009.
Similarly
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, Turkish
students
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 rose steadily from being the lowest among the three countries in 2005 with only 20
students
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 accepted to just over 120 in 2009

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, turkey, iran with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Enrolled
  • Enrollments
  • Trend
  • Steady increase
  • Initial increase
  • Decline
  • Sharp increase
  • Peaking
  • Noteworthy comparison
  • Contrasting trends
  • Period
  • Given period
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