The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.
The given table illustrates how
Ashdown
Museum was visited by how many society
after and before refurbishment. The given pie charts demonstrate how much the visitor was satisfied in two years.
Change to a plural noun
societies
Overall
, the total number of visitors to the Ashdown
gallery increased in the timeframe. Also
, the result of the survey shows the share of community
who were satisfied and very satisfied increased in the timespan. Add an article
the community
However
, the percentage of dissatisfied and very dissatisfied decreased in the same trajectory.
It is clearly seen that the Ashdown
hall
was visited by 74000 crowd before refurbishment. Capitalize word
Hall
Additionally
, after the Ashdown
building was refurbished, the number of visitors rose to 92000.
It is obvious that the proportion of public
who the satisfied and very satisfied were 30 and 15 Add an article
the public
percent
, respectively. Change the spelling
per cent
Then
it increased to 35 and 45 per cent after refurbishment. But, the share of the dissatisfied and very dissatisfied was 40 and 10 per cent, respectively. Subsequently
, it decreased to 15 and 5 percent.Submitted by Rangga on
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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