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The table below gives information about student enrolments at Manchester University in 1937, 1967 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. --DELETED LINK--

The table below gives information about student enrolments at Manchester University in 1937, 1967 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. --DELETED LINK--
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The presented table compares data about the percentage and number of various
students
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 from different
countries
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 and genders studying at Manchester University at 3 points in time namely 1937, 1967 and 2017.
Overall
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, it was important that the figure of people and the proportion of females and international
students
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 increased over the period of 80 years.
According to
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 the diagram, the score of enrolled
students
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 who studied at Manchester University rose from 327 in 1937 to 6245 in 2017. The fraction of women was
in contrast
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 to the men and supplemented other sex;
additionally
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, females formed 45% in 1937;
then
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 it fell to the minimum point of 35%;
however
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, it rose to 55% in 2017. The graph demonstrates that at the start,
students
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 who came from the areas that were near instituted composed 55% after that, it declined to a tiny fraction in 2017. In the beginning,
students
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 who were from global
countries
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 constituted 6% from 4
countries
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;
thereafter
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, it climbed to just under one-third from 102
countries
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 in 2017.
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