The bar chart below shows the popularity of well-known Instagram accounts in 2018 and 2021. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart provides information about the number of followers that five different famous influencers had in 2018 and 2021.
Overall
, there was a significant improvement count between the years 2018 to 2021. The users of Instagram accounts that followed popular artists was bigger in 2021 than in 2018.
Firstly
, Selena Gomez had the highest amount of public from social media in 2018. It was about 130 million
people who followed her. Secondly
, Cristiano Ronaldo had the highest number with a huge difference compared to other celebrities in 2021, he had more than 300 million
fans who followed his Instagram account. On the other hand
, the three other artists such
as The Rock,Ariana Grande,Kylie
Jenner had almost the same number of 250 Correct word choice
and Kylie
million
in 2021. We can see a slight difference between the figures in 2018. Ariana was around 110, Kylie was less than 100 and The Rock was the lower by 90 million
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