The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.
The provided table shows the number of
visitors
to Ashdown
Museum
both before and after the refurbishment
. The given pie charts demonstrate how satisfied the visitors
were in two years.
Overall
, the total number of visitors
to the Ashdown
Museum
increased in the timeframe. Additionally
, the survey results indicate a rise in the proportion of satisfied and very satisfied visitors
over the same period. However
, the percentage of dissatisfied and very dissatisfied visitors
decreased in the same trajectory.
It is evident that 74,000 people visited the Ashdown
Museum
prior to its refurbishment
. Furthermore
, the refurbishment
of the Ashdown
Museum
resulted in an increase in visitors
to 92,000.
It is evident that the percentage of individuals who expressed satisfaction was 30 and 15 per cent, respectively. After the refurbishment
, this
proportion increased to 35 and 45 per cent, respectively. However
, the percentage of dissatisfied and very dissatisfied customers was 40 and 10 per cent, respectively. Subsequently
, it decreased to 15 and 5 percent.Submitted by mkhdermani on
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