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The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.

The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.
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The provided table shows the number of
visitors
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 to
Ashdown
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Museum
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 both before and after the
refurbishment
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. The given pie charts demonstrate how satisfied the
visitors
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 were in two years.
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, the total number of
visitors
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 to the
Ashdown
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Museum
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 increased in the timeframe.
Additionally
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, the survey results indicate a rise in the proportion of satisfied and very satisfied
visitors
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 over the same period.
However
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, the percentage of dissatisfied and very dissatisfied
visitors
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 decreased in the same trajectory. It is evident that 74,000 people visited the
Ashdown
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Museum
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 prior to its
refurbishment
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.
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, the
refurbishment
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 of the
Ashdown
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Museum
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 resulted in an increase in
visitors
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 to 92,000. It is evident that the percentage of individuals who expressed satisfaction was 30 and 15 per cent, respectively. After the
refurbishment
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,
this
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 proportion increased to 35 and 45 per cent, respectively.
However
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, the percentage of dissatisfied and very dissatisfied customers was 40 and 10 per cent, respectively.
Subsequently
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, it decreased to 15 and 5 percent.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, ashdown, museum, refurbishment with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • refurbishment
  • visitor statistics
  • satisfaction survey
  • seasonal trends
  • demographics
  • benchmarking
  • feedback mechanisms
  • amenities
  • exhibitions
  • customer experience
  • turnaround
  • user engagement
  • footfall
  • improvements
  • disparities
  • perception
  • enhancements
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