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whar are the benefits of internet ? are thier higher then drawbacks of it ?

#whar #internet #thier
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The
Internet
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 is one of the most useful and practical
invasions
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 which significantly affects our lives.l completely believe that the benefits of it are higher than any drawbacks . One of the best and former benefits of the
internet
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 is that it helps us to get a
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 access to a lot of data no matter how old
are
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 your
internet
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 can be a source of a diverse range of topics and I spend a significant amount of my time on
this
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 space in order to find innovative approaches to enhance
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quality of the care that l offer for my patients . In conclusion, the
internet
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 has become an integral part of our lives in order to help us to deal with
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many challenges with a help of it
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task achievement
Ensure the introduction clearly outlines the scope of the essay and what to expect in terms of arguments.
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Develop each supporting point with specific examples and detailed explanations.
coherence and cohesion
Organize ideas logically to ensure smooth progression from one point to another within paragraphs.
coherence and cohesion
The essay presents a clear introduction and conclusion, outlining the main argument and wrapping up effectively.
task achievement
Emphasizes the importance and relevance of the internet in today's world, demonstrating relevance to the topic.

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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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