Planting trees is very important. Some people say that trees should be planted in the vacant areas of cities and towns, while others say that housing facilities should be built instead. Discuss both views and give your opinion with relevant examples?
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and others like to build their own houses. In Use synonyms
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oxygen
levels and good natural air. Use synonyms
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oxygen
level to 2.1 % so it is considered as important for all the country and governments are approach Use synonyms
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individually. Use synonyms
Additionally
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will increase, the environment gets into very cool place and particularly, there are more chances to have rainwater.
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On the other hand
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people
who want to build a new home for their living. Use synonyms
People
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also
want to take care of their parents so the basic requirement is individual house. Linking Words
For example
, the government bank has recently published a housing loan statement to the public, they showed that 68 % of Linking Words
people
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people
think that a house is a basic requirement. Use synonyms
Apart from
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people
who are living in rental houses, are paying more money to live so that’s the main reason to think about building a home.
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To conclude
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trees
in cities and towns is the best place, and others like to build their own houses. In my perspective, I would say both points are valuable to have benefits like Use synonyms
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living independent lives in their new homes. So both points are essential to have.Use synonyms
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task achievement
Try to elaborate more on each viewpoint to provide a balanced perspective. For instance, expand on why people prioritize building houses over planting trees.
coherence cohesion
Your ideas follow a logical flow, but consider using more varied linking words to better connect your arguments.
task achievement
You have addressed both views as instructed by the task prompt.
coherence cohesion
Your essay includes both an introduction and a conclusion, which nicely frames your response.
task achievement
You've provided relevant examples, such as the article from the World Organization Scientists, to substantiate your points.
Your opinion
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