The line graph below shows the changes in the share price of Outokumpu companies in euros between January 2006 and December 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph illustrates the amount of changes in the Outokumpu

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price

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euros

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from January 2006 to December 2010.

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, it is evident that the transformation in the

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price

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experienced a fluctuating pattern over the period, and it had the same number of changes in the

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price

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in both 2006 and 2010.

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, in both 2007 and 2008, the Outokumpu

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price

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had the highest change.

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in the

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just below 15

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and it had the wildest fluctuations between 2006 and 2009 , with a massive jump to approximately 30

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at the mid-year of 2006, decreasing slightly to below 25

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at the mid-year of 2007, before increasing again to 30

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in 2008.

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, the amount of changes in

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plummeted sharply, reaching below 10

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in July 2009, the lowest amount of any time that period. Ultimately, the figure steadily rose, reaching slightly above 10

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in December 2010.

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The line graph below shows the changes in the share price of Outokumpu companies in euros between January 2006 and December 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

one of the consequences of the medical care is that people are living longer and expentensy is increasing Do you think this advantage of development overwieghts the disadvantage?

In many developing countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction.What measures could be taken to prevent this.

The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

homelessness is increasing in many major cities around the world. what do you think are the main causes of this problem and what measures can be taken to solve it?