The map below shows a school in 1985 and the school now.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows a school in 1985 and the school now.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps depict a
school
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in 1985, and its development now.
Overall
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, it is evident that the
school
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witnessed significant transformations, including the narrowing of playing fields, adding new facilities
such
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as a pool and fitness centre, and removing the city road.
To begin
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with, a
school
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in 1985 had 1500 students,
while
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today it has 2300 students. A playing field which was located in the southern part of the
school
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became smaller;
however
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, a new pool and fitness centre were constructed adjacent to
this
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playground. The car park which was situated in the northern part, remained in its position but its shape was refurbished, it became oval rather than square.
Moreover
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, the central path of the
school
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in 1985 was removed, thereby, there are no cars allowed,
along with
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the elimination of the car park that was located within the
school
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itself.
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, a library was removed, and a new computer room and a learning resources centre were built in its position. A classroom block on the right side had only two storeys;
whereas
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, today it has three storeys,
along with
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adding new classrooms close to
this
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classroom block. Despite these changes, the office, entrance, and exit remained its position with no change
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "along with".
Vocabulary: Replace the words school with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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