The map below shows a school in 1985 and the school now.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps depict a

school

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in 1985, and its development now.

Overall

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, it is evident that the

school

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witnessed significant transformations, including the narrowing of playing fields, adding new facilities

such

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as a pool and fitness centre, and removing the city road.

To begin

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with, a

school

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in 1985 had 1500 students,

while

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today it has 2300 students. A playing field which was located in the southern part of the

school

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became smaller;

however

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, a new pool and fitness centre were constructed adjacent to

this

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playground. The car park which was situated in the northern part, remained in its position but its shape was refurbished, it became oval rather than square.

Moreover

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, the central path of the

school

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in 1985 was removed, thereby, there are no cars allowed,

along with

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the elimination of the car park that was located within the

school

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itself.

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, a library was removed, and a new computer room and a learning resources centre were built in its position. A classroom block on the right side had only two storeys;

whereas

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, today it has three storeys,

along with

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adding new classrooms close to

this

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classroom block. Despite these changes, the office, entrance, and exit remained its position with no change

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Vocabulary: Replace the words school with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

204 words

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