The map below shows a school in 1985 and the school now.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps depict a
school
in 1985, and its development now.
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Overall
, it is evident that the Linking Words
school
witnessed significant transformations, including the narrowing of playing fields, adding new facilities Use synonyms
such
as a pool and fitness centre, and removing the city road.
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To begin
with, a Linking Words
school
in 1985 had 1500 students, Use synonyms
while
today it has 2300 students. A playing field which was located in the southern part of the Linking Words
school
became smaller; Use synonyms
however
, a new pool and fitness centre were constructed adjacent to Linking Words
this
playground. The car park which was situated in the northern part, remained in its position but its shape was refurbished, it became oval rather than square. Linking Words
Moreover
, the central path of the Linking Words
school
in 1985 was removed, thereby, there are no cars allowed, Use synonyms
along with
the elimination of the car park that was located within the Linking Words
school
itself.
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Furthermore
, a library was removed, and a new computer room and a learning resources centre were built in its position. A classroom block on the right side had only two storeys; Linking Words
whereas
, today it has three storeys, Linking Words
along with
adding new classrooms close to Linking Words
this
classroom block. Despite these changes, the office, entrance, and exit remained its position with no changeLinking Words
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "along with".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words school with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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