The bar chart provided information about the drinking habits of USA people by age. Summarize the informationa nd by selecting and reporting the main feature.
The given bar chart illustrates the information about the drinking habits of the citizens of the USA by their
age
.
Overall
, the majority of the population in the USA never drinks, while
some people
after a specific age
leave their drinking habits. A considerable number of people
are light drinkers
, while
the least number of people
are heavy drinkers
.
In the USA, approximately 60 % of people
aged 16-24 years and never drinkers
. At their age
35 to 44, around 60% of people
are never drinkers
. However
, at the age
of 65-74, around 45 % of people
are never drinkers
. Meanwhile, from the age
of 16 to 64, people
drink
, however
, after the age
of 65 to 74, around 45% to 65% of people
become ex-drinkers
.
Moreover
, 60% to 90%of people
at
Change preposition
between
their
Change the word
the
age
of 25 to 34 Fix the agreement mistake
ages
drink
lightly, and around 85% to 95% of 65-74 aged people
drink
lightly. Meanwhile, at the age
of 45 to 54, approximately 90% to 100 % of people
drink
heavily.Submitted by rahman_rehana on
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