Government should spend money on railways than roads. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement.
Some
people
think that government
should spend money
on building railways
rather than spend money
on roads
.I completely disagree with the opinion that the government
should spend money
on railways
.
On the one hand, I accept that the government
should spend money
to build railways
, there are several benefits of building railways
. Firstly
, people
can travel
faster. For a long journey, people
should travel
by train
because travelling by train
is faster than by car
. If people
travel
by train
, the train
will not stop going, whereas
cars will stop at every traffic light and on the road there may be a traffic jam. Secondly
, the train
travels directly rather than cars and you will be at your destination on time . For example
roads
for cars and railways
in Uzbekistan. If someone wants to travel
from Tashkent to Khiva by car
, it would take around 14 hours to reach the destination, however
, if people
travel
by train
it would take 6 hours, and people
will save 8 hours if society travel
by train
. Because of this
point, I accept that the government
should spend money
on railways
.
On the other hand
, many roads
are not perfect.Many roads
very horrible because of potholes on the road. Because of holes in the road, there are many car
accidents, for example
, last
year's statistics show that 40 per cent of car
accidents were caused because of potholes. Secondly
, there are more people
who prefer to travel
by car
rather than by train
, that’s why the government
should spend more money
on roads
than on railways
.All year's statistics illustrate that people
travel
by car
more than by train
, and I agree with the opinion that the government
should spend money
on roads
.
In conclusion, I believe that the government
should spend money
on roads
, and in my point of view I agree with the opinion that the government
should use the money
to improve roads
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task achievement
Ensure that your examples directly support your main arguments. While the example regarding travel time between Tashkent and Khiva is relevant, more specific data or hypothetical situations could further strengthen your point.
task achievement
Work on maintaining a neutral tone throughout the essay even if your language leans towards one opinion.
coherence cohesion
Your essay has a clear introduction and conclusion, which helps frame your argument and sum up your position effectively.
coherence cohesion
The logical structure of the essay is sound, with clear organization and progression between ideas. Each point is linked effectively.
task achievement
You've presented a balanced view by acknowledging the benefits of both railways and roads, demonstrating a comprehensive understanding of the topic.