The table below shows the number of visitors to Ashton Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the results of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarized information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate how many people have visited the Ashdown Museum before and after its renovation. The charts
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, the figure for no response remains constant in these periods.
It is worth noting that the whole number of Linking Words
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increased significantly following the redevelopment. It rose from 74000 to 92000. With regard to the pie charts, the survey results highlighted substantial changes in visitor satisfaction. Before the renovation, only 15% of people were very satisfied, but Use synonyms
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