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The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. summarize the information by selecting main features.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. summarize the information by selecting main features.
The two provided maps illustrate the changes that have taken place in public libraries from 20 years ago to the present.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the public
library
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 has undergone considerable changes in all its locations.
To begin
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 with, 20 years ago the public
library
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 had CDs, Video Games, and Computer Games which was located in the northwest, the Reading room which was situated in the western south, the Inquiry desk which was located in the southern east, the children's
books
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 which were located in the northeast and Table and chairs which were located in the
center
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centre
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 of the public
library
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 campus with more facilities and a strategy.
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 with the present situation, The entrance remains untouched, and The tables and chairs are completely removed from the public
library
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. storytelling events, sofa, and children's fiction
books
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 which are located in the northwest, Computer room and all reference
books
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 which are located in the southwest, cafe, and self-service machines which are located in the southeast and the lecture room, information des,k and adult fiction
books
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 which are located in the southeast northeast location.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "to begin".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, books with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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