You are currently trying to improve your knowledge of a language which is not your first language. You have a friend who speaks this language fluently. You have decided to write to this friend Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, Explain why you want to improve your knowledge of this language ask him/her for suggestions on how to learn more quickly. propose that you meet your friend to talk about it. Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sarah,
I hope you are doing well. I am writing
this
letter actually to inform you about my plan to immigrate to Canada. As you know I'm not fluent in English
language and need kindly your Correct article usage
the English
helpfull
Correct your spelling
helpful
advises
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advice
how
fast Change preposition
on how
to
improve my knowledge Correct pronoun usage
I to
this
language.
If you remember, I have been working at a construction company for 25 years in Iran. The director is my close friend and has sent a Change preposition
of this
recomendation
letter to a Correct your spelling
recommendation
brittish
building company Correct your spelling
British
for cooperating
and if possible provide the conditions for my employment.
they have read my resume and Change preposition
to cooperate
seems
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seem
are
satisfied Change the verb form
to be
my
background Change preposition
with my
nevertheless
, i
have a Change the capitalization
I
significent
problem and Correct your spelling
significant
that is
fluency in English speaking and writting
. Honestly, at the Correct your spelling
writing
begining
, I was requested to hand over the license of the band score 7 for Correct your spelling
beginning
Ielts
.
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IELTS
Although
I know you are very busy, however
kindly ask you to accept my invitation to my house to refresh our meeting after months and at the same time, since you are definitely an outstanding English teacher, I guess undoubtedly your advice would help me to get the best results.
I am eagerly waiting for you to meet
Lovely
Masoud ReihaniSubmitted by MASOUDREIHANI1964 on
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single idea per paragraph
Try to improve paragraph organization by focusing on one main idea per paragraph. For instance, expand more on your reasons for learning English in one paragraph, and then on your invitation in another.
greeting and closing
Proofread to correct minor grammatical mistakes and typos, like "helpful advises" instead of "helpful advice".
complete response
The letter successfully addresses all parts of the task, offering explanations, requests for suggestions, and a proposal to meet.
suitable writing tone
The writing tone is friendly and suitable for a personal letter, which strengthens the connection with the reader.
logical structure
There is a logical flow from explaining the need to learn English, requesting help, and proposing a meeting.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,