a colleague at work is organizing a goodbye party which you are not able to attend . write a letter to him / her . * explain reason why you cannot attend * good memories you have spent * how you will stay in touch
Dear Monica ,
I hope
this
letter finds you in pink of your health and I am writing this
letter to say my inconvenience to attend the party that you arranged on next
Monday .
I know that ,
it will be a crucial day because you decided to leave Remove the comma
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from
our company . Unfortunately , due to some personal circumstances , I am unable to attend the party . As you know that, for the past few months I am suffered Change preposition
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some health issues and my doctor suggest me Change the preposition
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treatment for Correct article usage
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one week
duration . It includes a small surgery . so , I need to admit Add a hyphen
one-week
on
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this
Sunday and the treatment ends on
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next
Sunday .
I still remember that ,
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started
career
on the same day and we shared a lot of beautiful moments together . You are my good friend forever . I enjoyed moments with you especially at Fix the agreement mistake
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would like to keep the relationship with you because you are my best friend . I will call you after Change the capitalization
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I look forward to receiving your Add an article
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.
Yours lovingly ,
LiyaCorrect your spelling
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
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