a colleague at work is organizing a goodbye party which you are not able to attend . write a letter to him / her . * explain reason why you cannot attend * good memories you have spent * how you will stay in touch

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Dear Monica , I hope

this

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letter finds you in pink of your health and I am writing

this

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letter to say my inconvenience to attend the party that you arranged on

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Monday . I know that

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it will be a crucial day because you decided to leave

from

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our company . Unfortunately , due to some personal circumstances , I am unable to attend the party . As you know that, for the past few months I am suffered

with

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from

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some health issues and my doctor suggest me

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treatment for

one week

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duration . It includes a small surgery . so , I need to admit

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Sunday and the treatment ends

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Sunday . I still remember that

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we are

atarted

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started

our

career

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on the same day and we shared a lot of beautiful moments together . You are my good friend forever . I enjoyed moments with you especially at

time

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the time

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of our

last

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holiday trip to

mysoor

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Mysore

your

. I feel very sad and lonely because of your absence. please don't

irate

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with my absence

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your party and I will

definitly

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definitely

come to your home after treatment .

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would like to keep the relationship with you because you are my best friend . I will call you after

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returned from

hospital

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. I look forward to receiving your

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. Yours lovingly , Liya

Submitted by Liya on Thu Apr 18 2019

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
19
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

234 words

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