The table and pie chart give information about the population in Australia according to different nationalities and areas.
The two charts represent
the
information about Australia’s population Correct article usage
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according to
different nationalities and areas. Linking Words
Overall
, Linking Words
the
Australians are clearly dominating the percentage by at least 59% from others.
As the Australians were the most popular residents in the country, the second biggest percentage went to a mix of other nationalities, with the British following up in the third place. Three Correct article usage
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last
places combine New Zealanders, the Chinese and the Dutch adding up to only 6%. The Dutch and the Australians made up the most space of any other Linking Words
populations
in the countryside. Fix the agreement mistake
population
However
, the Chinese and New Zealanders were the two biggest communities in the cities.
In sharp contrast to Linking Words
this
, 99% of the Chinese people chose to live in cities rather than the countryside. Following them was the population of New Zealand with 90% picking city life. Third Linking Words
were
the British Unnecessary verb
apply
being
pretty close to New Zealanders only one Wrong verb form
were
percent
away from them. Change the spelling
per cent
Finally
, 80% of the natives chose cities rather than the countryside, being the smallest percentage of all the countries.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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