The graph below shows the average monthly change in the price of three metals during 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the price of three metals during 2014. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant.
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Presented in the graph below is the average monthly
price
variation of
three
metals over the course of 2014.
Overall
, the chart reveals that all
three
metals exhibited similar patterns of fluctuation throughout the year, with each experiencing periodic rises and falls.
However
, among them,
nickel
saw the most significant
price
changes, with larger peaks and deeper troughs compared to
copper
and
zinc
, indicating greater volatility in its
price
movements. From January to June,
copper
started at 1 and experienced a gradual decrease to just above -1.
Similarly
,
zinc
’s average
also
decreased from 2 to just above 1.
While
nickel
also
saw a decline, the drop was steeper than the others, reaching its lowest point of around -3, making it the most volatile of the
three
. These trends were followed by a sudden rise in July, after which the prices of all
three
metals stabilized until September. From September to October,
copper
,
zinc
, and
nickel
all experienced a slight decline to 0.5, -1, and -2, respectively. By November,
copper
remained unchanged,
while
both
nickel
and
zinc
saw their greatest
price
increases, with
zinc
reaching the highest peak among the
three
at the end
of the given period.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words price, three, nickel, copper, zinc with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rises" was used 2 times.
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