The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced.

The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced.
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The diagram illustrates the production of biofuel called
ethanol
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, there are 10 steps to produce
an
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ethanol
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Firstly
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, plants and trees
are grows
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by
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the
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exposure
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energy from sunlight and carbon dioxide.
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, once they reach the harvest
seasons
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, all the
plant
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and trees are brought to the next
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which is pre-processing.
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, the pre-processing will only take the part of the beads from the plant or tree. Fourthly, the cellulose in the beads will be
processing
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with other chemical
fluid
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into
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become
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sugars.
The next step is
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the molecules of sugars will be added with microbes to create
an
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ethanol
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,
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ethanol
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later will be used for a lot of transportation modes
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as cars, trucks or
airplanes
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of the steps, all of the transportation will
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a form of
emissions
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which is
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carbon dioxide into the air that later mixed with sunlight
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an
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energy.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words ethanol with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • biomass
  • ethanol
  • fermentation
  • microorganisms
  • yeast
  • carbon dioxide
  • distillation
  • purification
  • dehydration
  • raw materials
  • storage
  • distribution
  • renewable energy
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • sustainable fuel
  • concentration
  • impurities
  • alcohol content
  • crop growth
  • conversion process
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