The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced.
The diagram illustrates the production of biofuel called
ethanol
. Use synonyms
Overall
, there are 10 steps to produce Linking Words
an
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apply
ethanol
.
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Firstly
, plants and trees Linking Words
are grows
Wrong verb form
grow
by
Change preposition
through
the
exposure Correct article usage
apply
of
energy from sunlight and carbon dioxide. Change preposition
to
Secondly
, once they reach the harvest Linking Words
seasons
, all the Fix the agreement mistake
season
plant
and trees are brought to the next Fix the agreement mistake
plants
steps
which is pre-processing. Fix the agreement mistake
step
Thirdly
, the pre-processing will only take the part of the beads from the plant or tree. Fourthly, the cellulose in the beads will be Linking Words
processing
with other chemical Change the form of the verb
processed
fluid
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fluids
into
become Change preposition
to
a
sugars. Correct article usage
apply
The next step is
the molecules of sugars will be added with microbes to create Linking Words
an
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apply
ethanol
.
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Furthermore
, Linking Words
the
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apply
ethanol
later will be used for a lot of transportation modes Use synonyms
such
as cars, trucks or Linking Words
airplanes
. Change the spelling
aeroplanes
At the end
of the steps, all of the transportation will Linking Words
released
a form of Change the verb form
release
emissions
which is Fix the agreement mistake
emission
a
carbon dioxide into the air that later mixed with sunlight Correct article usage
apply
become
Correct subject-verb agreement
becomes
an
energy.Remove the article
apply
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