The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced.

The diagram illustrates the production of biofuel called

ethanol

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, there are 10 steps to produce

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ethanol

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Firstly

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, plants and trees

are grows

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the

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exposure

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energy from sunlight and carbon dioxide.

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, once they reach the harvest

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, all the

plant

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and trees are brought to the next

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which is pre-processing.

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, the pre-processing will only take the part of the beads from the plant or tree. Fourthly, the cellulose in the beads will be

processing

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with other chemical

fluid

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into

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become

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sugars.

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the molecules of sugars will be added with microbes to create

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ethanol

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the

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ethanol

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later will be used for a lot of transportation modes

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as cars, trucks or

airplanes

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of the steps, all of the transportation will

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a form of

emissions

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which is

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carbon dioxide into the air that later mixed with sunlight

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energy.

salwaputrihardiyan

Dec 11, 2024

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words ethanol with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

156 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

biomass
ethanol
fermentation
microorganisms
yeast
carbon dioxide
distillation
purification
dehydration
raw materials
storage
distribution
renewable energy
greenhouse gas emissions
sustainable fuel
concentration
impurities
alcohol content
crop growth
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The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced.

Students should pay full cost for their own study, because university education benefit individuals rather than society. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

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