The chart below shows the number of four different species of fish between 1982 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of four different species of fish between 1982 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the proportion of four different categories of
fish
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(
Atlantic
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Cod
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, Haddock, Yellowfin Tuna and Swordfish), from 1982 and 2007. The units are measured in 50000.
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, there was no fluctuation in the number of Swordfish
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the highest amount of
fish
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worldwide belonged to the
Atlantic
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Cod
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in the period given. With regards to the
Atlantic
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Cod
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and Haddock, there was a fluctuation in the rate of
Atlantic
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Cod
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at the beginning of the period it was approximately 230000 species
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a substantial decrease in the amount of
Atlantic
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Cod
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was seen between 1992 and 2007 in 150000 and roughly 130000 species respectively. In terms of Haddock
fish
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, it can be seen that there was no upward trend or downward trend in the year 2007 and it comprised
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about 60000 in the
last
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year. Regarding the remaining types of
fish
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worldwide,
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the fee for Yellowfin Tuna increased significantly accounting for 150000 to 200000 ( 1982-1992) ,respectively
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at the end
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of the period in question ( 2007), the bonus of the Yellowfin Tuna was 100000. In terms of the Swordfish as a matter of fact there was no
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between the first moment and the
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century what is more by 2007 it was just a little above 0 ( around 10000).
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words fish, atlantic, cod with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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