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J. The table below shows the expenses of a used bookstore in Scotland for the first and last month of the same year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.a

J. The table below shows the expenses of a used bookstore in Scotland for the first and last month of the same year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.a
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The given table illustrates the costs of second-hand bookshops in Scotland in the first and the
last
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 month of a particular year(2018).
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 the highest budget was allocated to rent in both months.
However
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, Maintenance accounted for the lowest budget in
January
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 and
December
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. The price of rent ranked the first in both months which was relatively more than in
December
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 with 4909$ by 1687$. Utilities stood at second rank with 455$ in
January
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 and
also
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, Other
expenses
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 with 599$ in
December
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. Notably, Wedge and Benefit, equipment and Utilities showed lower
expenses
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 in
December
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 compared to
January
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. Maintenance had experienced the lowest cost in
January
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 with 10$ which is about four times lower than
this
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 in
December
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 with 42$. It is noteworthy that the total
expenses
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 of the storebook were higher in
December
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 compared to
January
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 standing at 6571
due to
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 the increasing costs of rent, professional fees, marketing and other
expenses
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words january, december, expenses with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • expenses
  • used bookstore
  • comparison
  • categories
  • increases
  • decreases
  • total expenses
  • economic factors
  • seasonal demands
  • business model
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