The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The following pie chart shows the data about the preferred sites where
people
enjoy taking dance lessons.
Next,
there is a graph presenting three popular music genres chosen based on two ranges of ages.
Overall
, it can be seen that Private studios are the most famous places where
people
typically learn
this
cultural activity.
Besides
, Ballet is the preferred style of music for
people
under 11. At first sight, Private studios reached almost half of the results. School halls were positioned as the second place of election with under a quarter percentage.
However
, Community halls and others,
as well as
College-based studios, were the minority, with 18% and 10%, respectively. Regarding the chart bar,
people
under 11 are into dancing Ballet as its figure peaked at 600 students
practicing
Change the spelling
practising
show examples
this
genre.
In addition
, approximately 400 to 500 students attended Tap lessons,
whereas
ages 11 to 16 are slightly lower than those under 11.
By contrast
, teenagers mostly appreciate Modern music, as over 500 individuals have taken
this
dance class. In
this
case, those under 11 were lower, with 300 persons in attendance.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • attending
  • currently
  • location
  • variety
  • ballet
  • hip-hop
  • contemporary
  • jazz
  • venues
  • popularity
  • attendees
  • juxtaposing
  • correlating
  • proximity
  • cultural influences
  • trends
  • anomalies
  • monopoly
  • proportion
  • distribution
  • enrollment
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