The chart below shows the number of four different species of fish between 1982 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the line chart provides information about the
numbers
of four different types of fish between the years 1982 and 2007.
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overall
, the four fish species are swordfish, Linking Words
yellow fin
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yellow-fin
tuna
, haddock and Use synonyms
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atlantic
cod. Change the capitalization
Atlantic
there
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their
numbers
are Use synonyms
flactuaiting
over the years, yet some species' Correct your spelling
fluctuating
number
are constant through the mentioned rivals. we'll go through Fix the agreement mistake
numbers
som
specifications below.
even though it is a long period of time, Correct your spelling
some
yet
the Correct word choice
apply
sword fish
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swordfish
along with
haddock Linking Words
numbers
was steady throughout Use synonyms
alomst
three generations, with 10 Correct your spelling
almost
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thousends
and 70 Correct your spelling
thousands
thousand
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thousends
of swordfish and haddock respectively.
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thousand
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atlantic
cod experienced two delined trends, from 1982 to 1992 and from 2002 to 2007. their Change the capitalization
Atlantic
numbers
drop in the first period from 230 Use synonyms
thousend
to 150 Correct your spelling
thousand
thousend
, and from 180 to 140 Correct your spelling
thousand
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thousends
in the Correct your spelling
thousand
seconed
period. Correct your spelling
second
in addition
, Linking Words
the
Correct article usage
apply
yellow fin
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yellowfin
tuna
has Use synonyms
expereinced
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experienced
also
two Linking Words
decreas
trends, from 1992 to 2002 their Correct your spelling
decreased
nubmer
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number
has
changed from 200 to 135 Unnecessary verb
apply
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thousends
, Correct your spelling
thousands
thousand
moreover
, from 2002 to 2007 with less decline rate, their amount Linking Words
has
changed in the rival from 135 to 100 Unnecessary verb
apply
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thousends
.
both Correct your spelling
thousands
thousand
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atlantic
and Change the capitalization
Atlantic
yellow
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Yellow Tuna
tuna
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has
one up trend in two different time zones. Correct subject-verb agreement
have
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atlantic
up trend was Change the capitalization
Atlantic
in
2002 to 2007 from 100 to 150 Change preposition
from
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thousends
. Correct your spelling
thousands
thousand
while
yellow Linking Words
tuna
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riseing
trend was Correct your spelling
rising
in
1982 to 1992 from 150 up to 200 Change preposition
from
Use synonyms
thousends
.Correct your spelling
thousands
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Vocabulary: Replace the words numbers, tuna, atlantic, thousends with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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