Some people say that the main environment problem of our time is the loss of particular of plants and animals.Others say that there are more important environmental problems.Discuss both these views and give your own options.

Environmental degradation has become one of the most

debateable

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issue

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nowadays. Few people believe that

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main environmental issue of recent times is the

loss

of biodiversity

while

others disagree and think that there are other crucial problems which should not be overlooked.

This

essay will discuss both these views in detail and will explain why I think that

education

should be the top priority. The

loss

of biodiversity is one of the

by-product

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of environmental catastrophe that leads to the extinction of various plants and animals. Herbivores and carnivores help in maintaining the food chain which is essential for humankind as well. Their survival

become

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formidable in extreme environmental conditions and harmful agricultural practices.

For instance

,

due to

scaring

heat

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many forests catch fire which is not only perilous for plants but for animals as well. If humans will not save flora and fauna, it will

effect

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the food cycle and will contribute to the

loss

of biodiversity. It is the need of the time to protect these endangered plants and animals. Shifting towards the other view, people consider that various other significant

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such

as poverty, provision of healthcare facilities,

education

and economic growth should be

preference

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. Many efforts are

done

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to save the

exsisting

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existing

global environmental crises. A considerable amount of funds

are turn

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towards

this

cause. If

this

money is invested in

education

and eradicating poverty worldwide, potential benefits could be achieved.

For example

, in Pakistan almost 2 crore children are out of

schools

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,

however

, if

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proper

education

is given, they will learn to save the environment. All the resources should be spent on providing

education

to children. In conclusion, the

loss

of flora and fauna is

the

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vital problem

undoubtly

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undoubtedly

,

however

, there are plenty of concerning issues which should be the focus of the government. From my standpoint,

education

is the right of every individual, and it is the

responsibilty

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responsibility

of the government to provide it to people.