The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australias share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The bar chart illustrates the ratio of

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travelling abroad from 1985 to 1995 and the

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of

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travelling to

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.

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, there has been a gradual increase in

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numbers who travelled abroad over the past ten years.In 1995 it was the peak of the number of

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all over the world .A part of their travelling affected the Australian market, which

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gradually increased with the

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visits. The rate of

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individuals travelling abroad over the 10 years grew gradually until reached more than 14 million in 1995. At the

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, their number did not exceed 4 million in 1985. The numbers grew until 1991 were a little drop in the tourist numbers happened to 10 million in comparison with the previous years.

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, regarding

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contribution to the Australian economy,there was significant growth in the

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of

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travelling abroad coming to

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in 1988 with 4.7%. The

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of

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visitors continued to grow until reached more than 6% in 1995.

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, it seems that in 1988

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was not preferred for

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which explains the drop in the

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visits to

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to 4% in that year.