The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australias share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australias share of the Japanese tourist market.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
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The bar chart illustrates the ratio of
Japanese
tourists
travelling abroad from 1985 to 1995 and the
percentage
of
Japanese
travelling to
Australia
.
Overall
, there has been a gradual increase in
Japanese
numbers who travelled abroad over the past ten years.In 1995 it was the peak of the number of
Japanese
tourists
all over the world .A part of their travelling affected the Australian market, which
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gradually increased with the
Japanese
visits. The rate of
Japanese
individuals travelling abroad over the 10 years grew gradually until reached more than 14 million in 1995. At the
begnning
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beginning
, their number did not exceed 4 million in 1985. The numbers grew until 1991 were a little drop in the tourist numbers happened to 10 million in comparison with the previous years.
Moreover
, regarding
Japanese
contribution to the Australian economy,there was significant growth in the
percentage
of
Japanese
tourists
travelling abroad coming to
Australia
in 1988 with 4.7%. The
percentage
of
Japanese
visitors continued to grow until reached more than 6% in 1995.
However
, it seems that in 1988
Australia
was not preferred for
Japanese
tourists
which explains the drop in the
percentage
of
the
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Japanese
visits to
Australia
to 4% in that year.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words japanese, tourists, percentage, australia with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 3 times.
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