The map below give information about the university sport court in 1990 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below give information about the university sport court in 1990 and now. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and

make comparisons where relevant.
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The map below shows the changes
happened
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in the university sports court from the 90s to the present.
Overall
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, In 1990 there was a huge outdoor pool near the cafe and reception, and on the right side of the reception, there was a changing room next to it . In front of the pool, there were two large tennis courts.
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,there was a parking car area in front of the park . The modifications that are made at present are changing the
the
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pool from outdoor to indoor , but it remains in the same place.
Second,
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the tennis courts increased in number from 2 to 4
due to
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the student's increased interest in
this
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sport , and it moved to the parking space. in the previous
speace
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space
of tennis courts, they add a new fitness centre. The changing room moved next to the fitness centre to provide service to the fitness players .In the park, a new basketball court
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there .
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