The map below give information about the university sport court in 1990 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The map below shows the changes

happened

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that happened

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in the university sports court from the 90s to the present.

Overall

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, In 1990 there was a huge outdoor pool near the cafe and reception, and on the right side of the reception, there was a changing room next to it . In front of the pool, there were two large tennis courts.

Moreover

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,there was a parking car area in front of the park . The modifications that are made at present are changing the

the

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apply

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pool from outdoor to indoor , but it remains in the same place.

Second,

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the tennis courts increased in number from 2 to 4

due to

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the student's increased interest in

this

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sport , and it moved to the parking space. in the previous

speace

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space

of tennis courts, they add a new fitness centre. The changing room moved next to the fitness centre to provide service to the fitness players .In the park, a new basketball court

build

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there .

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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

163 words

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