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The internet is a good source of information and opened up opportunities for people all over the world. Is all information reliable online? What could be done to control information online?

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The internet is a global web that provides all
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 and opportunities worldwide.
This
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 why all
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 is not reliable and what measures could be taken to control
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 online. To commence with, the internet is an open web
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 accessible to upload and download any possible
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 to everyone. It means that
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 any person is able to get any
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 on the website, just by writing the needed topic.
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, it is not reliable for searchers in terms of the fact that there is no verification of the right
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while
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 the
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 is uploaded and people may face serious problems.
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, if there are any health issues, people tend to search the possible treatments on Google’s website which may lead to worse consequences because no one knows if the
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 is verified. Controlling
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 is a great opportunity to predict appearing unreliable
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. It means that
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 uploading the
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 it would be better to implement two sides of verification. One of them is to check the suggested material itself with the help of high-tech AI and the second is to verify the author. It would help humanity to prevent unreliable and false
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.
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, in China, before uploading any scientific research, the author must get permission from a governmental institution to provide all possible proof.
To sum up
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, the internet is a great opportunity to find any desirable
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.
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 not all provided
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 is reliable, as no one checks it before uploading, there is still a good chance to prevent the bad consequences by using AI that checks the
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 and verifies the author.

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task achievement
Your essay provides a complete response to the task and covers both aspects of the question. However, try to develop the points further to provide a deeper analysis.
coherence cohesion
Ensure consistency in sentence structure and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of repeatedly stating that the internet allows for uploading and downloading data, highlight specific instances where information might be particularly unreliable.
coherence cohesion
The essay has a clear and comprehensive introduction and conclusion, providing a strong framework for the discussion.
task achievement
You have used relevant specific examples to illustrate your points, such as the health information example and the process in China.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • repository
  • accessibility
  • credibility
  • regulation
  • misinformation
  • fake news
  • biased reporting
  • public opinion
  • fact-checking
  • curate
  • digital literacy
  • discern
  • censorship
  • free speech
  • integrity
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