Many think that religion should be taught in schools while others think it should be avoided. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In the contemporary world, certain groups of people are of the opinion that religious

value

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need to be taught at

school

while

other

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others

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oppose

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. I believe that educational institutes should focus on academic performance

than

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rather than

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religious

aspect

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aspects

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. In

this

essay, I shall discuss both

view

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and

support on

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opinion

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opinions

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. Nowadays, many schools are teaching religious values and

celebrate

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cultural festivals which is

practically

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a practically

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illogical

approch

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approach

for educational

institute

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. At many locations around the globe, people have

objection

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on

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institutes because people do not want their

kids

to participate in

others

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religious activities.

For example

, there is a

school

in Punjab, India where teachers were

celeberating

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celebrating

Muslim

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the Muslim

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festival Eid and Hindu students and

family

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families

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had

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conducted a protest outside the

school

because everyone

have

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to be involved in a

school

event. So, I believe

school

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schools

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shoud

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should

not participate in any kind of religious event.

On the contrary

, many individuals are of the opinion that children should taught

religion

at

school

. They give an argument that

kids

spend

majority

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of their time at

school

than

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home

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at home

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. Many schools start their day with

a

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name of God in India and every lecture

start

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with

a

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name of

because

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. These prayers help them concentrate on their education. It is always challenging to maintain balance when

religion

is taught at

school

because

kids

are coming

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from variant religions and cultures.

To conclude

, many schools are teaching

religion

at

school

which

have

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conflicting

thought

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thoughts

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in the community. I believe that educational

institute

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institutes

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should focus on

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the academic

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academic

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academics

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of the

kids

rather than any

religion

or culture.