You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter •explain the important event •apologies for the situation •suggest a new arrangement

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Dear Navneet, I hope you are doing well. I know I promised you to meet
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during these
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these
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Christmas holidays, but I want to cancel the meeting because of some essential event at home.
Firstly
, I want to inform
to
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you that my
cousion
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cousin
brother
rahul's
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rahui's
Rahul's
engagement is fixed and we organized the event for his engagement
ceremoney
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ceremony
these Christmas holidays. I know
this
is
little
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a little
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amazed
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for you because you planned everything
according to
that. I know you are going to understand my situation because you're my best
freind
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friend
. I am really sorry for
this
inconsistency.
However
, I promise you to meet at
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the new
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new year
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New Year
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party. We will
be enjoying
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enjoy
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together
this
party. I look forward
for
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to
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your reply about
this
new arrangement. With love, Suman
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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