The charts below show the sales of new cars in 1984, 1993 and 2013.
The chart
comperes
the sales of new Correct your spelling
compares
cars
in Australia in 1984, 1993 and 2013.
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Overall
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it is clear that
the most popular Linking Words
car
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models
were Use synonyms
sedans
, Use synonyms
whereas
the least Linking Words
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popular one
one
were Correct pronoun usage
ones
SUVs
.
As the chart shows, in 1994 the most popular Use synonyms
car
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models
were Use synonyms
sedans
with 74%, and the least one were Use synonyms
SUVs
with 7%, Use synonyms
whereas
other Linking Words
car
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models
were 19%. The total Use synonyms
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cars
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number of cars
had
sold Unnecessary verb
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were
42.900. In 2004 Correct subject-verb agreement
was
sedans
had sold more than other Use synonyms
cars
, 62% and 21%, respectively, Use synonyms
while
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SUVs
had sold 17%. The total Use synonyms
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cars
Correct quantifier usage
number of cars
were
71.000. In April 2013 the total Correct subject-verb agreement
was
cars
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were
85.000. Correct subject-verb agreement
was
SUVs
were less than other Use synonyms
cars
, 17% and 32%. The most popular Use synonyms
car
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models
were Use synonyms
sedans
with 51%.Use synonyms
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