Some people claim that manufactures and supermarkets should increase packgaging while others argui that individuals should avoid packaging. discuss both views and give your opinion

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today's

world, almost all the

products

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are sold in packaging. Few

people

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think that production companies should increase packaging

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others disagree and think that it should be avoided as much as possible.

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essay will discuss both these views in detail and will explain why I think that packed

products

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are not the best option. Wrapping improved the life of the

products

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and protect

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protected

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them from harsh conditions, termites and dust.

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keep

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the

poroduct

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product

fresh as much as possible. So, when it

will reach

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the consumer, it can be in the best position.

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, it not only

keep

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the product in a better condition but

build

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the

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better

relation

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relationship

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between buyer and seller.

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, many items are transported to other countries

through

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airplane

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airplanes

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and

cargos

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, where it takes longer than expected, coverings, in these situations will

improvise

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the efficiency of the

products

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. Packing has certain benefits,

that is

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why some

people

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think that it is significant, because it increases the shelf life of the things. Shifting towards the other view, many big companies produce packaging which is attractive in

appearence

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appearance

, Because of these market tactics,

company's

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the company's

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sales

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are boost

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boost

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then

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people

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are persuaded to buy them through heavy advertisements.

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, they are advertised on social media which attracts plenty of

audience

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which increases mass production and is an environmental threat. Most of the

products

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are non-biodegradable and only

contributes

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to the landfills and cause environmental damage. In conclusion, packaging has potential benefits and drawbacks, despite these

people

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buy

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them in large amounts. In my opinion, biodegradable

packing

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packaging

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should be made because it is not catastrophic for the environment.

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Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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