The plans below show a student room for two people and a student room for one person at an Australian university.

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The map shows the plan of
two
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rooms for 2 and 1 individual respectively at an Australian university dorm. Primarily, we can see that the first
room
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is wider than the second anyone by 1,5 meters,
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their length is similar. Generally, it is evident that a
room
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for
two
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people has one more bed and desk. On the map, we can see that beds are placed perpendicular to each other, and separated by
two
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cupboards. There is no bookshelf in the apartment for one person, and one in the
room
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for
two
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individuals placed next to the study desk. In both apartments bathroom is located in the left upper corner. On the plan of the apartment for
two
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students, kitchen stuff like stove microwave and sink are connected to each other and located oppositely to the bathroom,
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on the first chart,
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the wider amount of space, the stuff is placed next
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the exit door, and there is are
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dinner place with table and chairs in the middle of the
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. In conclusion, despite the limited area, the university provided all the needed stuff, like television for entertainment and individual study desks for every student to create a comfortable environment for all undergraduates.
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