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Band 6.5

Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter: – Your reason for writing – What you would like to happen – A nice, respectful style

#neighbour #dog #reason #style
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Dear Mr. Sharma, I hope you are doing well. I am writing to you to express my issue with your
dog
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. I know
this
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 sounds
little
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a little
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 bit rude to you but it is very difficult for me to sleep at night time when your
dog
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barking
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barks
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.
Firstly
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, I want to say sorry to you because I know your
dog
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 is a child to you.
However
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,
In
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the
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apply
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night
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nighttime
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 time when you let your
dog
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 stay in
backyard
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the backyard
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, he always
barking
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barks
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whole
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the whole
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 night, because of
this
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 could not sleep and
next
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the next
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 day I
have
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had
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 to go on my job. So,
whole
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the whole
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 day I cannot concentrate on my work
due to
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 improper sleep. As a solution, I would suggest
to keep
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keeping
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 your
dog
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 inside
please
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, please
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.It will help me
alot
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a lot
. I hope you will understand, as you are
also
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 a workaholic person. Thank
for
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you for
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 considering my request. Have a good day to you and your
dog
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. Yours sincerely, Suman
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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