The parents of your Australian friend Chris have invited you to a surprise birthday party for him/her. Write a letter to Chris’s parents. In your letter •Say why you think Chris will enjoy the surprise party •Explain why you won’t be able to attend the party. •Give details of a plan to see Chris at a different time.

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Dear Uncle and Aunty, I hope you both are doing well. It's been a long time
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you both. First of all, thank you for inviting me
in
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birthday
party. I am writing to you to tell you that I cannot attend the
birthday
celebration of
Chris
. I know I am
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freind
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friend
friends
of
Chris
and I join each and every event organised by you to support
Chris
.
This
time there is a solid reason for not coming to the party. I hope you remember I told you
my
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Ielts
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IELTS
exam, I booked the exam one day before Chriss'
birthday
but I received
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from
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an institution
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that
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is delay
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one day because of some issue. So, I have to go to write my paper. I know you are going to give
Chris
a new Tesla car on his
birthday
as a surprise.As
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this
is his
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car. I am sure he will love the surprise. I promise
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you guys that will soon make
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to meet
Chris
on
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new
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year.
Therefore
, I can apologize to him for not coming to his party and
moreover
, we will enjoy a new year together. Best regards, Suman
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